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Stand for something or you will fall for anything.
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In riding a horse, we borrow freedom.
-Helen Thompson
Horse Stuff
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Stand for something or you will fall for anything.
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I'm twisting a dangerous web around me. A web of treason, of truth, of freedom.
Thanks for the critique and compliment
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In riding a horse, we borrow freedom.
-Helen Thompson
Horse Stuff
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I'm twisting a dangerous web around me. A web of treason, of truth, of freedom.
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Pinterest [link]
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In riding a horse, we borrow freedom.
-Helen Thompson
Horse Stuff
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Pinterest [link]
However, the horse in front has blue ears where the lightings sort of ruined the original picture. It's an easy fix, just clone over it.
Second - The lighting. If you see in the background the hills are lit up strongly where as the field where the horses are in aren't really, and considering the lighting on the horses you've used don't really seem to match up very well. If any lighting on those horses it should just be highlights around the muscles etc. Hehe, and also don't pick horsies with random shadows such as the one on the front that has what looks like the shadow of a tree on it's tummy.
Third - The far back horse shouldn't really be there. It doesn't fit in and just makes the picture far to busy.
Fourth - Feet blending. There should be more erased from the legs as the grass is higher and different lengths. And on the middle horse it's not very well blended in, just erased.
Fifth - Shadows. I think they should be slightly more solid and not blurred. Only some shadows don't go up to the horses hoof.
Sorry if that sounds really harsh. But I could go on a lot longer about what's good about this picture! Lovely work on this and I hope you get some good points!
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"Listen, I have to spend everyday living with me so I know for a fact that I'm lovely. I'm completely lovely."